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MLP: Masters and Students - Cover by Yula568 MLP: Masters and Students - Cover by Yula568
This comic was started originaly as an alternate scene, when Twilight finds King Sombra's hidden vault in the throne room. I totaly expected, that Sombra takes notice and appears before Twilight.
But as I writed this one... it became something more, and I went into some fanfic direction ^^;

This story is just an idea of me, about King Sombra's youth and the way he learned magic. It would fit into the episode perfectly, if Sombra tell Twilight about his ways, so Twilight could see the wrong way, where she shouldn't go. As a part of her test.

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ComedyTeam Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Morgoth and sauron relationship, it could happen
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Dir-En-Grey-Gabriel Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I read this Comic all the way through And Enjoyed it. You Have a Great talent. If you plan to go deeper into the Story of Sombra Might I Suggest something. The Entity that Trained Sombra that pushed him to find his calling. it Reminds me of My OC I created Named Emnity (Not the Final Name and I am Up for Suggestions on better ones.) Could you Possibly Use my Character in it? He is Basically Evil Manifested into Physical Form and Could Very Well Be Considered The Devil in the MLP Universe (Well In Mine at least.) I gave him connections t actual Lore on Differant Devils and Made Him a Silver Tongue Aspect Like Loki But Can Only Truly effect One Who Has Doubt in Oneself, Anger or, Built up Rage. He Cannot Effect Discord Because of His Natural Chaotic Personality and Celestia Is of pure heart. Luna Was Only Influenced by him Spiritually he pushed her to become Nightmare Moon. Well Its A Suggestion. I love the Story its A Perfect 10/10 And I'd love to see more. Tell me if You Like My Character idea BTW and If You Have an Idea for a Better Name tell me and Thank you. Also Your Art Is Great better than Mine I am not So great at Drawing Ponies Saddly LOL!
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Yula568 Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013
Hi! First: I'm glad that you like my comic :aww:
Second: Sorry, but I have my own imagination about Sombra's story, and his "mentor" in my world is Grogar, from the old G1 series. I know, he belongs to the old series, but that's going in my head ^^;
But of course I don't want to influence your story :blush:
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Dir-En-Grey-Gabriel Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I Have No Complaints Like I said It was An Idea. 
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Nukarulesthehouse1 Featured By Owner May 30, 2013
[link] Me and my friend did a fan dub for this. Hope you like! :D
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Yula568 Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2013
Eeeep :excited:
*blushing and watching the video*
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Nukarulesthehouse1 Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2013
Hope you like! :D
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Eisenfell Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013
That comic is Awesome ! *wiggles in his chair*
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Yula568 Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013
Thank you :aww:
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L4m3ness Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2012
Oh, you also made Pony Shen! *has to throw an eye on you* :iconfluttershyyesplz:
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alek4ever Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2012
Sombra telling Twilight about his way? I call hoax on this one, it is common fact that Sombra can only say ''slaves'' and ''crystals''.
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DWproductions1 Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013   General Artist
I thought one time he said "That is mine" hmm.... 030
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The-Shipping-Killer Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2012
I like it but could use some work on spelling.
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Vypor Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2012
Just read the whole thing. I don't often comment on the things I look, but I believe yours merits some accolades for it's work.

First off, I really enjoyed the style, you had a unique feel to it. Almost anime, but not quite. Which is good.
The story was believable, though the lines chosen by Sombra did feel a tad... 'Suggestive', for lack of a better word.

As for grammar, I understand you aren't a native English speaker, and as such, I can say you did a rather good job on it overall.
Shame on those who so saw fit to put you down for something you cannot help. You did the best you could, and I can legitimately say that it was an enjoyable read.

Keep doing what you're doing.
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Yula568 Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2012
Thank you very much :aww: Your comment meant a lot of me.
There is too much "grammar-comment" for now... and some of them is rather rude for me -.- I just wanted to make fans happy with this comic (not to mention myself :D), and all some people see is grammar.
I am realy happy, that there are poeple like you, who cheer me up :aww:
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Vypor Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2012
Well you're very welcome. An artist must be lifted up and encouraged, not put down.
Critiques are mostly lost on today's generation.

Also, I'd say you've succeeded in your attempts to make something enjoyable.
Frankly, I envy your artistic talent. lol
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Anzu18 Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2012
Screw the grammar, you made the best comic ever! :D I read it every day, because I love Sombra... and you made him more badass:)Thank you so much! <3
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Yula568 Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2012
Thank you :hug:
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PonyMystic Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
i read later lol
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Goblin-Time Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012
Looks great!
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Dakathi666 Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012
Hmm
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almightybooda Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012
I like this take on Sombra. Please continue
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starlightdraik Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012
Overlooking the grammar mistakes, this was an enjoyable read. The artwork was especially enjoyable.
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ULTRADJ4EVER Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012
So Celestia was like to Sombra: "Yeeesss, let the hate flow through you."
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mesalo Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012
this would be great!!!!
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raggyrabbit94 Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
cool cover. excellent. :clap:

their was so much backstory that the episode didnt explore, i woulve love to see the origin of sombra and give him more screen time.

anyway, great picture. keep it up
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:iconyula568:
Yula568 Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012
Yes. I missed some more scenes from Sombra's first arrival to the Crystal Empire and his reign over the crystal ponies.
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DarthWill3 Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I have a feeling that Sombra was Celestia's master... before she betrayed him. Such is the Sith way.
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Yula568 Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012
I support the idea, that Sombra was something like a little brother to her and Luna. That would be much more cute to imagine :aww:
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DarthWill3 Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I see...
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kiinastar Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012
Nice!!!
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Anzu18 Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012
Epic. Simply epic. Just like your comic :D
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