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November 23, 2012
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MLP: Masters and Students - Cover by Yula568 MLP: Masters and Students - Cover by Yula568
This comic was started originaly as an alternate scene, when Twilight finds King Sombra's hidden vault in the throne room. I totaly expected, that Sombra takes notice and appears before Twilight.
But as I writed this one... it became something more, and I went into some fanfic direction ^^;

This story is just an idea of me, about King Sombra's youth and the way he learned magic. It would fit into the episode perfectly, if Sombra tell Twilight about his ways, so Twilight could see the wrong way, where she shouldn't go. As a part of her test.

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Dir-En-Grey-Gabriel Aug 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I read this Comic all the way through And Enjoyed it. You Have a Great talent. If you plan to go deeper into the Story of Sombra Might I Suggest something. The Entity that Trained Sombra that pushed him to find his calling. it Reminds me of My OC I created Named Emnity (Not the Final Name and I am Up for Suggestions on better ones.) Could you Possibly Use my Character in it? He is Basically Evil Manifested into Physical Form and Could Very Well Be Considered The Devil in the MLP Universe (Well In Mine at least.) I gave him connections t actual Lore on Differant Devils and Made Him a Silver Tongue Aspect Like Loki But Can Only Truly effect One Who Has Doubt in Oneself, Anger or, Built up Rage. He Cannot Effect Discord Because of His Natural Chaotic Personality and Celestia Is of pure heart. Luna Was Only Influenced by him Spiritually he pushed her to become Nightmare Moon. Well Its A Suggestion. I love the Story its A Perfect 10/10 And I'd love to see more. Tell me if You Like My Character idea BTW and If You Have an Idea for a Better Name tell me and Thank you. Also Your Art Is Great better than Mine I am not So great at Drawing Ponies Saddly LOL!
Hi! First: I'm glad that you like my comic :aww:
Second: Sorry, but I have my own imagination about Sombra's story, and his "mentor" in my world is Grogar, from the old G1 series. I know, he belongs to the old series, but that's going in my head ^^;
But of course I don't want to influence your story :blush:
Dir-En-Grey-Gabriel Aug 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I Have No Complaints Like I said It was An Idea. 
[link] Me and my friend did a fan dub for this. Hope you like! :D
Eeeep :excited:
*blushing and watching the video*
That comic is Awesome ! *wiggles in his chair*
Oh, you also made Pony Shen! *has to throw an eye on you* :iconfluttershyyesplz:
Sombra telling Twilight about his way? I call hoax on this one, it is common fact that Sombra can only say ''slaves'' and ''crystals''.
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