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MLP: Masters and Students - Pg03 by Yula568 MLP: Masters and Students - Pg03 by Yula568
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"He speak about... that I make him remember to himself?? How?"

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bloodstone38 Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2014
Sombra is hitting on her for sure. I think this two would make a good couple.
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LillyGeneva Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2014  Student Digital Artist
*Gets elements of harmony* SOMBRA STAY AWAY FROM TWITWI!!
Sombra: Dafudge?
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LillyGeneva Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Also that last frame; If you had it without the callouts I think it would be awesome-er-er...er
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ronin6401 Featured By Owner May 15, 2013
You could stand to some better editing in regards to your dialogue. You overuse commas and your frequently use the wrong words as well.
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Freethinker5 Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012
"So... Raw! So fresh magic! So eager to learn! An empty, what wants to be filled with knowledge." Okaaaaaay, I'm getting a very "violate-y" feel from him.
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LatiasBlue Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2012
I was going to say *insertkingsombrarapeface* but I guess youre right :D
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Valkurian Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012
Why is it that the only people producing things like this can't write proper English?
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Dianacat777 Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2013
Really, don't be cruel. Not everyone in the world speaks English as their native language. Be appreciative that they translate it at all.

If anything, my only problem is that Twilight tells Spike to shut up. Seems a little cruel for her. D:
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Yula568 Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012
Okay... This is the last time I write this! I don't have beta reader and I'm not english. I made this comic alone. It was a huge work.
I already have a lot of comments about grammar, which I don't understand! Please stop!
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Armasyll Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2013
Get someone to rewrite it, then :v
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:iconyula568:
Yula568 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013
Ignored.
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:iconarmasyll:
Armasyll Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013
That's not a good mind-set :L
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Dr33dVap0r Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012
Lawl, this is the truth. Perhaps we can convince the artist to redo it correctly.
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BB-K Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Twilight is quite the prodigy, eager to learn more and deeper towards the core of knowledge!
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ArkAngel04 Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Is it wrong that Sombra sounds British in my head.
he just seems that he would have that calm sinister demeanor like a bond villains
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ShallowNate Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012
Some errors...is English your first language?
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Btworld69 Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012
so cheesy..
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:iconrazmere:
Razmere Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012
AAAAAAAAAAAND this is already a better story than the premier.
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templar127 Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012
GASP! NO!
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chris100100 Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
*Then king Sombra let Twilight walk away with the crystal heart
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039520 Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012
last panel :iconnowkissplz:
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pyrotec911 Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012
Mixing up words for other words is a little bit jarring.
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Omny87 Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012
Aside from the spelling and grammar mistakes, this is getting good so far.
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