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MLP: Masters and Students - Pg09 by Yula568 MLP: Masters and Students - Pg09 by Yula568
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The end. Sombra disappears with his shadow-magic and Twilight goes into the depths.

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I hope, you like it. Thank you for the reading! :aww:
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:iconkisamefanfromhell:
KisameFanFromHell Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2015
This was downright wicked awesome, snow it just leaves me wondering if an AU could spring off from this! ^_^
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Wait0wat Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2015
"Princess to kill."

Well this terminology seems like a step-up then the usual Child-friendly dialogue that happened a comic strips ago. Anyway,

Plot: Sombra appears as an apparition, or some sort of holographic, mirror projection and tries to convince twilight sparkle to become his mentor and rule the Crystal Empire. (OF COURSE!!) but is then rejected by twilight to find The one thing that can push Sombra back from assulting the Crystal Empire. Now, with these fan-made stories, I'm OK with them, just so long as they to have a good story. But that task seems to be difficult when it comes to Sombra, I mean what can you work with when you have a villain who is motivations are so cliché that you believe that these plots are being bought at a superstore, rather than being created on their own,Who getsso little screen time that he's barely memorable, and who had the maximum number of dialogue lines of 5 to 6;this is not including the repeated words like crystals or the roars and grunts. This artist at the best to his abilities to try and make some flushed out character and I applaud his effort.

Setting: judging from the events of the beginning of season 2, this appears to be a deleted scene from when twilight first uses the dark magic to find the stairway down, for lack of a better term, basement. Though I think the scene in the show was alright,I feel like this adds a little bit more kindling to the fire in terms, of flushing out Sombra. Which isn't a bad thing, mind you, but it is a difficult task as I said before.

Characters: Sombra, in this fan-made comic, is like a mirror reflection of himself. kind a like one of those holograms you see in the sci-fi shows, only there for show and not for really much of a threat except for...probably the psyche? whatever the case is, he's there to have a little bit of a discussion with her main character; trying to mess her up by comparing himself to her or trying to persuade her to becoming his Apprentice. Twilight has been told as being a pony who loves to learn about magic, much like those people who would want to learn everything about anything. she has some lines here and there, but I think the main focus is Sombera, rather than Twilight.

Conclusion: although I like the effort to flush out Sombra as a more developed character within the fandom,I feel like we're trying to build something up with limited to scarce resources.and I did like this comic, the art style was nice, Sombra in this comic seemed more memorable than the one in the show, but I feel like we got on board a 2-parter train and the second part just seem to be nonexistent. I would like to seem more of a satisfying conclusion of Sombra, rather than him just being exploded by McGuffin. But I don't know if this artist has made a second comic and I'm just too tired to find it, if it's been developed as we speak, or just cut off from the role of continuity like a sack of heavy potatoes.

Rating: 4/5 Assassin signs :iconassassinsbureauplz:
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:iconpikachufan260:
Pikachufan260 Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
please make more of it pleeease :3?
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:iconyula568:
Yula568 Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2015
I just made this as a missed scene. But thank you ^^;
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:iconpikachufan260:
Pikachufan260 Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
ur welcome
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:iconnecromancerking85:
NecromancerKing85 Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
cool comic
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:iconkingofthecouch:
Kingofthecouch Featured By Owner May 29, 2015
i now want to make a dark magic user oc
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:iconsilentartist137:
SilentArtist137 Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Is there more to this? A sequel, a second chapter, anything? It's soooooo goooooooooooood!!!!!
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:iconraventhedoll:
raventhedoll Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
coool hope there a next chapter
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:iconbluebeacon:
BlueBeacon Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
is this suppose to be taking place during the crystal empire episode because if so bravo
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:iconlillygeneva:
LillyGeneva Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Oh poo this is getting even epicer-er-er... er
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ShadowLDrago Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2014
I know the writers of the showe wanted Sombra to be a Sauron like looming presence, rarely actually doing something, but this would have been awesome, ti would have showcased Sombra as an actual effective villauin, in the show, he could barely speak, I realize that after 1000 trapped in the ice as a shadow creature with only his rage and dark magic must have taken a toll on his sanity, but still, they could have had him do something!
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:iconmykelti:
Mykelti Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2014  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
this... so... much... fangirl

I think I've fainted. 
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:icono0airheart0o:
o0Airheart0o Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2014
Alright, I approve of this sorta-fanfiction! X3
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:iconalexfr36:
alexfr36 Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2014
Why there is not a moment like that in the show ? It would have been awesome...
Nice work, by the way ^^
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:iconsup-gurl:
Sup-Gurl Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2014  Student Digital Artist
sooo king sombra is the badass villan.
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apple-dash-swag Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
awesome i like it but can someone make obiusly a fanmade that twilight go to the dark side and stay whit sombra or something pleaseeee
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zakera34 Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2013
This is what it should have happened in this episode, that would have made Sombra fucking badass.


Nice work !
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:iconjbrenham:
jbrenham Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2013
The grammar aside this is pretty neat.
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:icongalbrony3:
Galbrony3 Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Awesome !!!!!
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:iconponymystic:
PonyMystic Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
That was fun! XD
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KamikoKittyCat Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2013
To avoid spamming you with favorites, I'll just favorite this one, but I read and enjoyed all of them <3
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:iconmylittleprimo:
MyLittlePrimo Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
:iconjokertrollfaceplz:
:lol:I see what you did there!
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:iconyula568:
Yula568 Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2013
:D
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:iconmylittleprimo:
MyLittlePrimo Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
:(You might have to let me know when you continue this comic series, for it's the only thing I'm really interested in, therefore I can't DevWatch you. Sorry.
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:iconyula568:
Yula568 Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2013
I never wanted to continue this... this is just a "missed scene" idea from me. I wanted to see something like this in the real episode :(
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:iconmylittleprimo:
MyLittlePrimo Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
I see.
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:iconmskillerwolf:
MsKillerwolf Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2013
How dare you pull me into this greatness and not continue. I was way wrapped up into it. A well its best i go to bed anyway. lol
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:iconyula568:
Yula568 Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2013
Uhm... this is complete. It's just a scene I missed from the show. From here it's the rest of the Sombra-episode.
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:icondrx-raven:
DrX-Raven Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013
*Raven & Dr. X*: .......... www.youtube.com/watch?v=yu_RmS…
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:iconalexkazhdan:
AlexKazhdan Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:icondeadpool--plz: :iconsaysplz: Hah! No more cookies for you! :iconsaysendplz:
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:icondrx-raven:
DrX-Raven Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2013
Raven: If you want friends, DP, you don't have to stalk me.
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:iconalexkazhdan:
AlexKazhdan Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:icondeadpool--plz: :iconsaysplz: Stalking is the sincerest form of flattery. You should be enjoying it. :iconsaysendplz:
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:icondrx-raven:
DrX-Raven Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2013
Raven: I don't enjoy this kind of flattery....
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:iconmskillerwolf:
MsKillerwolf Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2013
I know but it still would be fun to see where this would go if you did not follow the show. ^^
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Fire-Warrior-Tirawa Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
i loved it! u r really good.
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SparkTheDog Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2013
If Hasbro did this in S3:E2, Sombra would be getting a lot more dirt than what he's getting right now.
(Every one is laughing at him for not doing anything and the fact that he tends to repeat "Crystals" every now and then)
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:iconalexkazhdan:
AlexKazhdan Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
When you say "dirt", is that supposed to be a good thing or a bad thing? :)
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:iconsparkthedog:
SparkTheDog Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2013
good thing.
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:iconalexkazhdan:
AlexKazhdan Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
In that case I don't agree with you. If this happened in the actual show, everyone would be bashing Sombra for being a cliché villain who tries to turn the protagonist to the dark side. This has been done way too many times.
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GoldenSparkles Featured By Owner May 16, 2013  Student Digital Artist
OuO nice!!!
I wish you had continued the story, but it's awesome already :D
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ronin6401 Featured By Owner May 15, 2013
Your grammer and poor dialogue aside, you really do have a firm grasp of plot. Personally, this is how I think Sombra and the season three premier should have been. If MLPFIM has one defining flaw, its the lack of strong and villainous antagonists. (Generation 1, despite being geared towards young girls, did have some surprisingly nasty villains in it.) Some final advice, Sombra's dialogue in the final panel isn't so much a hint as it is an unlabeled spoiler. Hints need to be subtle (IE: Oh and one more thing...they say one has nothing to fear but fear itself. I'll be watching to see if that's really true.)
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sunblaze32 Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2013
The cool thing is, this could have actually happened, It doesn't interfere with what already happened in the episode.
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:iconeisenfell:
Eisenfell Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013
Graaaah Crysssstaaallls ....Slaaaves.....Graaaaaaah ! couldn't resist ... <3
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:iconyula568:
Yula568 Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013
I bet he is more intelligent that that, just episode writers let him down :D
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:iconeisenfell:
Eisenfell Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013
ofcourse hes a Smart Evil genius ...but its like a Bad Nickname , hes stuck with the Cliche
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:iconwerecass:
werecass Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2013  Student Artist
Are you going to make a sequel after when King Sombra die? You could put his spirit in Twilight. Just giving you some ideas. And great job.
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:iconyula568:
Yula568 Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2013
I have plans with King Sombra and Chrysalis ;)
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:iconwerecass:
werecass Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2013  Student Artist
Oooooh, I see. Sounds nice. Are you going start it now or not yet?
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:iconyula568:
Yula568 Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2013
Not yet. It's still in my head only.
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