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The Return of Tambelon - Out There by Yula568 The Return of Tambelon - Out There by Yula568
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"All my life you told me, the world is a dark, cruel place! But now I see the only thing dark and cruel about it is creatures like you!!" (Bray)

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Someone once said me, that in my story about Tambelon, Bray's character is like Quasimodo from Disney's Hunchback of Notre Dame. And... as I listened the songs, over and over again, I always imagined, as Grogar sing the beginning of the "Out there" song to Bray. ^^;

Some details, for the understanding of this comic:
As I said some times, Bray is an unicorn in my tale. In the beginning of the story, he is hiding his horn under his big mane. It has a big impact on my story, as he learn the truth about himself.
He don't know it, because Grogar wanted to raise him in fear, so burned every book about unicorns and their magic. And the troggs were also forbidden to say anything.
Bray lives in fear from his inner magic, and thinking, he is not normal, even among ponies. He begin to suspect, that something is not quite true, when he meet with Twilight, who is a princess by the time of these events. And there are the unicorns in the city's dungeon. It is still requires Twilight's kindness and help for Bray to realize, he is not "ugly", not "deformed" and not a "monster".
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:iconaburameclanhead:
Aburameclanhead Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2015  Student Writer
Beautiful!
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GUILLE832 Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2014
I am still waiting for your version of Hellfire! Oh, don´t be so modest; I know it would be incredible :la:
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:iconyula568:
Yula568 Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2014
I had one... for Sombra and Chrysalis :heart: :meow:
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GUILLE832 Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2014
Upsie...
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DarkLord-95 Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Love it! Let's hope Hasbro see this and make an episode of this for season 5.
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temus Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2014
i like this me too draw something combining the G1 and G4:

temus.deviantart.com/art/idea-…
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BlueBeacon Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2014
I love it do more but only if you make bray the hero of the story :)
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DawnTheADHH1655 Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
will you be writting a story? if you are i cant wait to read this ^.^
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:iconyula568:
Yula568 Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2014
It's just in my head yet ^^;
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DawnTheADHH1655 Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
ohh okay and its okay :iconhugplz: it seems like a very cool story line
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Necromagenvion Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2014
Most of the servants of G1 villains had a rough time, some of them remained loyal (despite the fact that they would be treated like garbage), others simply took the opportunity to betray them in order to side with the good forces. And Bray here, well, he's truly a tragic figure.
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IAmTheVeryBadArtist Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
He's calling him deformed, when he has curly, curly goat horns...I'mma just face palm at the stupidity of Tambelon's plan. :iconfacepalmplz: 
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project-ZDI Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2013
oh so bray is full unicorn i always thought he was just a mule that inherited a horn from a unicorn parent.
and thats why he is kept away...because a mule with magic is unheard of.
but still i love this concept

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:iconyula568:
Yula568 Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2013
I explained everything in the description. 
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project-ZDI Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2013
i know, i read it before commenting. i only stated what was on mind at the time durring my faving of it.

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metalsystem761 Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2013
too me till the end to get it
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Static-Dr0p Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2013  Student Digital Artist
1: I love that movie and know it by heart.
2: THIS MUST BE ANIMATED! :iconsadfaceplz:
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Yula568 Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2013
I would love it too. But I don't know anyone, who could animete this :( I can't...
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NeonBlacklightTH Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I would actually like to see this animated, yet alone have Grogar being a major villain in the series. Possibly a Season 4 opener like they did with Nightmare Moon and Discord? I'm not sure if Sombra was an opener but if he is then he counts. If however he's REALLY impressive then maybe Grogar will have his own official MLP:FIM Movie, an ACTUAL movie not like that one movie which I refuse to discuss which makes me want to slap a bitch and piss in her grave BUT ON THE PLUS SIDE this could be awesome. If you have the time you could make this a comic series, if you have the time and friends willing then you can make it faster, if you have friends who are animators and have time on their hands then I say take the chance and make this into your own Fan Movie. We need a REAL MLP Villain, and from this Grogar fits the case. He's evil, I can imagine him having Quasimodo's voice which in my opinion would actually fit him not like something too dark and echos like madness.
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Yula568 Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2013
Well... I always wanted to take part in a fan-movie *.* As story-writer ^^;
But I have no such friends -.-
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IceStormy Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2013
Can I be your friend?
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NeonBlacklightTH Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Either that or start your own chapter story of this? You know sort of like a script but keeping it in a story form. Many people do this, even some script writers for movies. They tell the story first, and when the writing is about to be in a movie the writing is then changed into scripts.
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NeonBlacklightTH Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Well it doesnt have to be a full motion movie? It can be a stop motion. Like back in the old days or something, there are people who draws out simple scenes and get voice actors to voice out the characters for that scene. In time when you get the talent on animation or gain a friend who has animation skills, you can flip that video around and turn it into a full moving animated movie.
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Belle04TMNT Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2013  Student Artist
Awwww. I feel bad for Bray. X'C
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xelianthought Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2013
Impressive. 
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Mediocre-Grimm Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013
Hunchback and Ponies... 


You have my undivided attention. 

Always loved Grogar. I could definitely see him as a Frollo type character. 
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KingFlameHawk Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2013
Any one else notice that the other wooden doll looks an awful lot like Fluttershy. Guess someone has a crush.
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:iconyula568:
Yula568 Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013
The doll has white mane and it represents Bray's mother from his dreams. He don't know, who she is, just dreaming about her.
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Nintendogamemaster Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2013
LIKE MAGIC!
DARK MAGIC!
THIS MAGIC IN MY SKIN!
THIS BURNING, DESIRE!
IS TURNING ME TOOO SIN!

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Sorry, I had to :XD:
By the way, awesome work. :D
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Blackvegetable Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2013
I thought it sounded familiar! And nice adaptation!
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StoneHot316 Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Looking good! :3
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ScarabDynasty1 Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I am very curious to read this story. I loved the original in the classic series. You wouldn't happen to have a fanfic anywhere, would you?
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Yula568 Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2013
It's only in my head ^^;
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ScarabDynasty1 Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Aww ^_^ Well, you should gibe writing it a try! You've already got at least one reader right here :3
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aaron-autumrush Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2013
okay cuddos to the lyrics quoting and setup what with the character and items and i would like to say i love how grogar looks just as evil as frollo
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Chatterbeast Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
"Nopony wants to stay cooped up here forever."
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Macbow333 Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2013
I don't know Grogar's real voice, but just hearing him with Frolo's voice just feels so right.
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Macbow333 Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2013
*Frollo
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NeonBlacklightTH Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I always loved this part of the original movie, that and Hellfire. I guess Froto (I think that's his name I cant quite remember?) has that one voice you would like to hear him sing like this?
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Macbow333 Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2013
It's Frollo. Don't worry; I misspelled it too.
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MissIp Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2013
that was genius
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Kisara16 Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2013  Hobbyist
poor guy :iconcryingplz:
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RoyCalbeck Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Nice take on the originals!  Both of them!
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DJSALTINE Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer

Excellent!

 

I get a classic, nostalgic feeling from this piece, considering Hunchback was one of my favorite movies!

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Toogadab137 Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2013  Professional Photographer
I love this!!!!!!! MOAR pwese!
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Mioumioune Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2013  Student General Artist
I like it ! :D
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BB-K Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I thought Bray is a donkey.
Anyway, a great story. :) I really damn wish the FIM crew would to utilize some old villains like Grogar, if not Tirek, after all, I know Nightmare Moon is a dark character (Sombra & Chrysalis are not so much due to lack of potential display) but I know those 2 G1 villains are the best ones I can remember.

If only it's matter of time till Canterlot face Grogar again, light against darkness, hence Celestia will lead the army to war to banish the evil city back to Tartarus.
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Yula568 Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2013
I like to imagine him as a pony. It's much more interesting for the story. 
About Celestia vs. Grogar, you think something like this: yula568.deviantart.com/art/Cel… ? :aww:
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BB-K Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yeap, but I'm talking about wishing the crew would bring back G1 villains, they're darker, I even find Katrina is acceptable too even though she's not all that really evil.
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AnUnfoldedPaperTiger Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013  Student Writer
PLEEEEEEASE continue this! I beg of you!
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