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The Saphire Prism by Yula568 The Saphire Prism by Yula568
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Hah!! G-ghost?? (Chrysalis)
Please... don't fear me! I... didn't see living for a long time... (Ghost of Queen Saphire)
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Who are you? (Chrysalis)
My name is Saphire, and I am the last queen of the Crystal Empire. (Ghost of Queen Saphire)
You are the one, who was killed by Sombra a tousand years ago! (Chrysalis)
That's not the name I know him. The one you call "Sombra". I was killed by my most precious friend. My best friend. (Ghost of Queen Saphire)
The Sombra I know, don't make friends easily. (Chrysalis)
He was different back then. He came to my kingdom as a member of Starswirl, The Bearded's order. He came to study the empires magic. The Crystal Heart. But his order urged him. He had not much time to complete his research. He was young... and he wanted to prove his masters, he is strong. But... he was so gentle. So brave. I... loved him. All of my subjects loved him. But like everypony else, he wasn't perfect. he was impatient. His superiors called him back... but he wanted to stay. And... (Ghost of Queen Saphire)
And? (Chrysalis)
He made a mistake. He released a sinister power. Something evil. A secret of our empire. It consumed him. Corrupted him. Turned him against us. And... I made a mistake too. (...) I didn't kill him. I saw my friend. I knew he is not himself. I couldn't kill him. And with this decision... I doomed my subjects. My empire. Myself. (Ghost of Queen Saphire)
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Now I haunt these halls. This is my last refuge. The chamber of my last treasure. (Ghost of Queen Saphire)
This... the Prism! I saw it on paintings in the castle! (Chrysalis)
I give it to you. (Ghost of Queen Saphire)
Why? (Chrysalis)
To help you. You have an opportunity. You can end my friend's curse. Please! Take my Prism! It will help you. It will show you the truth. And truth is the most powerful weapon. (Ghost of Queen Saphire)

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Music - www.youtube.com/watch?v=1NOpIT… :aww:

The Saphire Prism
"A lost treasure of the Crystal Empire. It was given to Queen Saphire by her husband and was named after her the "Saphire Prism" . The Prism can show memories of the past, in the area, where the user stands."


PLEASE READ BEFORE COMMENT!
--Update--
So. This picture is happening after the "Wedding" and the "Rebellion of the Queen". Sombra defeat Chrysalis an cast her to the depths of the castle. A forgotten labyrint, where Chrysalis meet the ghost of the last queen and find an ancient relic, which can aid her in her new quest: to save the Crystal Empire from ruin, and to free her loved colt from an ancient curse.

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(I would be very thankfull, if somepony could voice-act this conversation... I feel so good, when I find treasures like that on youtube :aww:^^;)

Tumblr: eliavraay.tumblr.com
Chrysalis (c) Hasbro
Queen Saphire and story (c) me
Music: Jade Empire - "The Waterdragon"
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:icondevilgirl007:
Devilgirl007 Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2014
This is very well done. I have Queen chrysalis the sister of Queen crystal (my oc) and how she got here.
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artlover138 Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2014
where's the rest of the fanfic for this?
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:iconyula568:
Yula568 Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2014
It's not complete. Please read the other comments -.-
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Eeveeworlds Featured By Owner May 4, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Wow very beautiful and sad....I love your story! :)
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EOWDT Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
uuuuh, very nice pic :3
But.... the name shouldn't go BEFORE the line? It's realy hard to understand who is talking until the end of the sentence :\
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randombrowser8513 Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2013
Mind drawing when the prism was used?
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:iconyula568:
Yula568 Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2013
:?
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:iconrandombrowser8513:
randombrowser8513 Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2013
When chrysalis uses the artifact
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:iconyula568:
Yula568 Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2013
Uhm... that's a bit complicated to draw ^^; I have other plans. 
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8Kiba9 Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2013
okay can someoe PLEASE turn this into a full fanfic PLEASE? And if someone has already done that, where can I read it?
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Terrortheslayer Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2013
this need to be a fanfiction the feels X'D
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Kai45 Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2013
Cool story!
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schorpioen007 Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2013
Very amazing story ^__^
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djumbreon Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer

here's the link to it. ^^

 

www.facebook.com/photo.php?fbi…

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:iconyula568:
Yula568 Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2013
Wow! Thank you :aww:
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Sweetscandies Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2013
how did you know that? if it's a comic sent me the link (:D
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:iconyula568:
Yula568 Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2013
It's... just in my head ^^;
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Sweetscandies Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2013
Oh... XD 
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sithwolf Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
so awesome great work yula
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Raydhen Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Truly Amazing! I always thought if Sombra used to be a somepony who learnt the mystery of Crystal Heart... then he was corrupted..
btw, such a great painting and story :icongoodjob-plz:
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GUILLE832 Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2013
Great piece! The feelings are perfectly transmitted, the style is amazing and your style leaves me speechless
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SuperSweetSugar Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2013
This backstory is great,I can't wait for more!:iconshaplz:
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BB-K Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Chrysalis seems to give away her bio-crown. :o And interesting story of the fallen Queen, if only I wish it was actually Cadance's mother.
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Yula568 Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2013
She lost the crown during the fight, what brought her to these depths of the castle. And... I still don't decided yet about Saphire. Cadance is too young to be her daughter, even if she is an alicorn. Their immortality isn't comfirmed yet... so let's just say, Cadance is her descendant.
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BB-K Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Suppose so although the canon shows she was originally a pegasus.
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templar127 Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2013
Amazing backstory about the Crystal empire!
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djumbreon Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Mind if I post this onto my face book page? ( credit will be given along with a link to the deviantation. )
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:iconyula568:
Yula568 Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2013
If you credit me, you can post it of course :aww:
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yoshiegg64 Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2013
It is a little eerie, how similar they look here. By the clothes at least.  Any idea how many parts will be in this story or are you still deciding that?
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Yula568 Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2013
I don't know yet. I write this fanfic in hungarian language... so I don't know if I can translate it, or (the bigger problem) complete it :confused:
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nioniosbbbb Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2013
YES!!! ME LIKEY!!!
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LordPendragonOfCaria Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2013

Wow! :wow: That's a very good story :D

 

I also like your idea of King Sombra murdering his way to the throne of the empire. That's a headcanon I utilize, myself :nod: I also like how the queen is a unicorn. I too have often pictured unicorns (hence including Sombra, from an evil sense) as being sort of the noble class, above the far more common earth pon-like Crystal Ponies.

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